Luigie Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 Rich Boyz - Young Starr Lil Kiddo: Daddy can i be rich?? Father: What you mean?? Lil Kiddo: I saw on the TV a couple of boys with a lot of cash, hot rides and fine ladies...they only say non-sense stuff bout ice and grills... Father: Ahh...well you see, theres a lesson behind this, son...lets change the channel [Verse 1] Many of my homies these days dream with an easy life, Which aint wrong, only I aint feelin how they wanna touch the sky, Y'all gotta understand theres a balance between money and respect, Between Love and sex, so you can achieve all wat you expect, I know you wanna be followed by all the paparazzis, But theres a long way till you'll be able to catch this, There are simple rules which gotta be followed, Then you can stand in the middle of the street and proudly say "holla", Before the earings, thousands of chains in ya neck, Ya must sweat it, and don't ask daddy for money, am I correct?, Yeah say the grown dawgs, no say the young boys, They prefer to be stealin or another wrong choice, And others fantasy with a huge mansion and a expensive car, Doin nothin but standin in a goddamn bar, How's that listener? Are you feelin guilty?, Don't worry, aint late, first step is admit you been silly... [Chorus] Rich boyz, claimin they're hood stars, Doin nothin but startin dumb wars, Between whos the realest tough guy, Man, come on, you and me know it's another lie, [Verse 2] I respect differente styles, even I don't feel em, But I hate dawgs pretendin to have sumthin that aint inside of em, Talking about others cant shine like he does, Dissin and bluffin, but face it man, the crowd doesnt feel ya cause, my style may not be the same like yours and I still talented, Yours its okay, but seems like you cant get this party started, Sorry but that's the only way I know to let this clear, Clean up ya ears, hear me, admit this aint ya year, Understand what im sayin, feel my lyrics, Then you can come up and start the critics, Be realistic, your thing aint got no soul, Nobody cares bout what you told, ya spit is totally cold, Like the ice you wear in ya mouth and show every second, Wake up, don't you see your realness have just been gone?, Braggin and barkin sh*t like you're a hood star, Shhh...rich boy, let the mic free for young starr... [Chorus] [Verse 3] Its time to care more about the important things, Not do a song adorin or desiring to wear a bling, This rap sh*t got mores fields in which it can expand, Not necessarily do social raps, its up to you man, I know cause you're young, people don't take you seriously, Don't give em reasons to think that, I mean really, Ya must rebuild your songs, do it again and again, At the end you'll see it didn't matter the time you've taken, Cause the only thing that matters is your passion, That you gotta have to stand in a stage and be the main attraction, Be real man, if your from the hood, work for ya hood, If you feel like you got a thug life, don't turn ya style into loot, Ok if you didn't got the chance to put ya feet into a college, It doesn't mean that you aint nobody, use your street knownledge, Im searchin for the perfect way so I can do sumthin, You should too, tryin is better than nuthin... feedback apreacciated :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 "Y'all gotta understand theres a balance between money and respect, Between Love and sex, so you can achieve all wat you expect," - I especially liked these set of lines. It's pretty good Luigie. Overall message works and all. You spread your verses well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 I agree with Fuq. There is a Group called the Rich Boyz tho, with Lil Romeo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BamF Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 I really wasn't feeling it.I liked where you were going with the message and all, but as for the rhymes it was pretty down low :sorry: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 16, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 (edited) I agree with Fuq. There is a Group called the Rich Boyz tho, with Lil Romeo. actually it was kinda a diss to that bunch of clowns :wiggle: btw..thnks y'all! Edited August 16, 2006 by Luigie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 Good rhymes man, you've came along way Before the earings, thousands of chains in ya neck, Ya must sweat it, and don't ask daddy for money, am I correct?, dope lines Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted August 18, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 I really wasn't feeling it.I liked where you were going with the message and all, but as for the rhymes it was pretty down low :sorry: What do you suggest then? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted September 4, 2006 Report Share Posted September 4, 2006 I'm feeling in man! Good job! Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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