Mike Posted August 17, 2006 Report Share Posted August 17, 2006 (edited) this is a nas inspired track i wrote. lets see if you can guess which track of nas' that inspired me to write this one. Precipitaion © Written by Concept Im cold and I reign from the sky Not God, similar to a tear you cry Im small in form but when I get together I can kill you in a flood you can call that bad weather April Im tired of the sunshine all around So I storm and make sure I spread frowns all around I gotta have my way I dont care what you want I erupt with thunder little kids I haunt Feared amongst the young, loved among the old Gather round in my storm there are stories to be told You pollute my supply so I seek revenge Drown a boy who cant swim make sure its the end You drink me and piss me take me for granted Wash away blood from fresh blows that were landed Im the bare bottom minimum only I quench thirst Third world countries need me the worst Home to Atlantis and I want another slaughter Two hydrogen, one oxygen, Im water (Chorus) [Thunder] Drip, Drip, Drip Here I come down your drain [Thunder] Drip, Drip, Drip Every drop sounds the same [Wind] Float down, float down Im drifting from the sky [Wind] Float down, float down See my beauty in your eye Come December I freeze up Results; people warming hot coco, coffees, and teas up I turn to ice on the ground people slip up on me You get scared for your health so you throw salt fondly I turn to snow and nip like scissors Then the sh!t comes down and I bring you a blizzard People pack their stuff prepare for the worst Shovel me away but I was here first I must mean nothing you turn me yellow n black The oil from your cars and the pee from your sack After you see me once then youre satisfied Youre sad when I show up again like someones dad just died Im not appreciated like Rosa on the bus So I collaborate with rain and start to make slush Then the bastard sun melts me away Cocky cause he shows up every single day Always working hard like a colony of ants Cant wait till spring so I can get another chance (Chorus) So many raindrops kinda like freckles Youve seen my Hyde side now see Dr Jekyll Poems and pictures dedicated in frames A kiss is more romantic when youre standing in rain As I lay on the ground in form of a puddle Kids jump on me for joy then their parents rebuttal When its hot outside you jump in my pool Swim in my lakes I will keep you cool In the winter im a toy with snow balls and snow men Snow angels and ice skating think a place youve been That was a mess before then it was turned it to art Cause snow covered the mistakes on every single part My ice storms take away electricity but listen I make it worthwhile because the trees now glisten I forgive your mistakes what youve done to me In return clean the water, make it fun for me Ill be here forever dont worry im patient Im snow, rain, hail, my names precipitation (Chorus without words) Edited August 17, 2006 by Concept Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 19, 2006 Report Share Posted August 19, 2006 Wow. This was very creative and I loved the flow. I really like the whole idea, yet I have no idea about which Nas song it could be. And that's bad cuz Nas is like one of my all time favs. I was readin' this to Common's "The Food" and it sounded sweet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted August 22, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2006 (edited) it was nas's "i gave you power" where hes writing from the perspective of a gun....but holy sh!t, i made a really good beat for this (in my mind at least) and its 99% done. i just need to fix a part that plays when its not supposed to, its a flaw in the system i guess, not on my part. but it will be on my myspace when its done, ill post it on this thread when it is Edited August 22, 2006 by Concept Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted September 25, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 hey i have a demo version of this song with a beat that i made for it, its alright i think this is a link to my myspace so you can see it- that way i dont have to bother with certain ppl not being able to download from differnt places http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea...iendid=55056753 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frosty Posted September 29, 2006 Report Share Posted September 29, 2006 I liked the beat but you gotta speak up some more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted January 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2007 hey on www.myspace.com/conceptisgood i put up my new version and the old version for comparison, you should really check the difference, with my new mic and all... so do that hahaha. this is the reason im not in the audio battle..... more to come.. Neutral Ground is finally coming along Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 I checked it, and I heard the difference. Even just 20 some seconds in it. Good job gettin' ya focus on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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