J-o-e Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 Hey Wasup ya'll, it's been a hell of a long time coming, but I've finally done an audio :lolsign: and it's called "World's At War" this version isnt the best but its the best out of the ones I got, I have a sore throat now and can't record till tomorrow lol, but anyway I need advice and any tips will be so useful, Thanks Enjoy!!! http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?acti...455D53C7D3EEB2D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 It`s dope for your first time. You sound a lil quiet, but your flow is definitly on point. I love that Beat. Mobb Deep? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 I honestly dont know what beat it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 (edited) I just checked my albums. The Beat's from Mobb Deep's "Hell On Earth (Frontline)". Its that beat, just with some extra drums addet to it. Edited September 2, 2006 by Turntable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 The audio is a decent 1st. anyway, I thought that beat was Lil Zane "Ways of the World" when I first heard it. Didn't know Mobb Deep did something like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 I like! I think you got ALOT of potential! You just need to clear up the audio! Your lyrics and flow are all on point as earlier stated! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 Wow, thanks guys, how do I clear up the voice anyway? Is there a shortcut of doing it, or isit because I have a habit of moving the mic everytime I rap...I get a bit enegertic when I rap Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 You really shouldn't be touching the mic at all when you record vocals Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 Its cool man, i liked it, good job, but sumtimes looks like you record too close to the mic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 thanks for the tips, this isnt the version that will be on my album so don't worry...I'm still getting the hang of all this new technocolgy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevTastic Posted September 3, 2006 Report Share Posted September 3, 2006 yeh, sort that mic out, Recording straight into the computer can be a bitch sometime. But the lyrics and flow were good mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel Amor Posted September 3, 2006 Report Share Posted September 3, 2006 Awsome! I like it. U have a really good flow there :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted September 4, 2006 Report Share Posted September 4, 2006 Nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny 5 Posted September 4, 2006 Report Share Posted September 4, 2006 Yeah mate, I like your track. The beat was used on Craig David's first album, that's where I recognise it from, dunno where else it's used. Your voice sounds fine, there's NO point trying to change it to sound different, that ain't you. Just need to clear up the vocals... I know it's kind of an emotional/deep track but maybe sound a bit more enthusiastic?? Great start tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted September 4, 2006 Report Share Posted September 4, 2006 (edited) Yeah man, its pretty hot for a first audio. The beat sounds like "Rise & Fall" from Craig Davids "Slicker Than Your Average" album. Edited September 4, 2006 by Big Willie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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