mfuqua23 Posted August 7, 2004 Report Share Posted August 7, 2004 (edited) I just wrote this. I got inspired 2 write it after I listened 2 Makaveli's "Krazy". But the title has been in the works since June 27, 2004. [i]August 7, 2004 (4:13 a.m. - 5:08 a.m.)[/i] [b]CHORUS[/b] Feel this vibe Survive my suicide Tell the plan of how I'd die If I didn't wanna stay alive I know ya askin' how'd it happen, why'd I feel this way Nothin mattered any more, and I'd wanna die someday Emotions played wit since the beginning of my ages My life's contained, so I tell outta pages Life would go on, but I couldn't stay strong Apologizes would follow me from people that did me wrong They'd be accepted like the speeches of an honored man But hidden in a false reality, they were never my friends What'z goin on?, Why?, who did this 2 me? Make me wanna come 2 the end of the road of life, and think my spirit was free No pleases, no thank U, moral sense is a problem 4 some U killed me, on my own, my family's lost their adopted son From both sides of America, the crack took over So folks blame that causin the pressure, dyin' wit the world on my shoulders But it's not; how else would I be here, kickin' this vibe tellin U what it'z like 2 survive my suicide The plan is perfect, but it'z so unpredictable Can I die peacefully, instead of bleeding da body as I lose my cool Won't choose a sharp knife, that ain't my type cuz I'm scared of physical pain, and how it stops my life Tried 2 strive 4 da best, but they weren't a success So I'd wanna go silently, and dysfunction when I rest Even if I didn't need em, I kept em 4 some reason Da pills ready 2 pop, so I could see what I believed in Is it treason, I barely read the scriptures of the disciples Had experiences, so they know way more than I do Times have changed and some lessons rearrange No one takes notes of my actions, if they start 2 get strange Being too quiet is a danger, and that I do know Since I thought about leaving, does maturity still show Where do I go from here, since I'm stayin alive And remembering what it'z like when I survived my suicide __________________________________ Any questions or comments? Let me know. Peace! Edited August 7, 2004 by mfuqua23 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted August 7, 2004 Report Share Posted August 7, 2004 Very well done! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2004 Thanks. I'm gonna lace the tracks 2nite. that'z rite i said tracks. the og and da remix feat. ashanti. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 8, 2004 Report Share Posted August 8, 2004 I like how you did this man... Will be interesting to see how all this all comes together on track. Keep us updated on that! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2004 Thanks Prince man. I did a lil rehease and both sound good. I can't wait 2 drop em. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted August 8, 2004 Report Share Posted August 8, 2004 Hey whusup, you heavy in da game boy, keep yo **** on and you'll make it big. check out my topic "Me Myself & I" Peace Loco A.K.A. L' Chico Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2004 Ahead of ya already. I just did. Gonna check da audio too. Thanks man 4 ya feedback. And I kno I can make it if i stay wit it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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