DevilsJim89 Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 Yo guys, this is my first ever completed song I wrote. Now in the past I wrote some verses here and there but never a full song. I'm gonna lace the track sometime this week maybe when I can find a good instrumental...or if someone wants to make a beat for me, thats great. I need real opinions here too. Don't laugh either...rookie over here... ---------------- This is How I Rip It Date: August 7, 2004 On ya mark get set, here I go as it's another white boy doin a rap show people dissin on me as I step up to the plate swing, and the pitch is straight to the gate I look up and smile at the people in envy, the people with hate after bein' influenced by rap's best I know I don't need much skill to put 50cent to a test once in awhile someone call me a wigger yo but im different, i dont mess with pullin a trigger living in a community the music was punk rock used to hear that **** be played on every other block i tell em I listen to 2pac and they be in shock but i never fell in that trap instead i just loved my old-skool rap my desire was inspired by JJ+FP followed by the DMC, BizMarkie, K+P and AD but thats how it was back in the day and its the style I like to play so yo, dont flip y'all cuz this is how I rip it Chorus: Ch-ch-check check it out ch-ch-check check it out This is How I rip it yeah This is How I rip it ch-ch-check check it out ch-ch-check check it out This is How I rip it Growin up as teen I wasn't fully focused in the latest rap scene lyically flat, little to no skill completely amazes me how they make at least a mill haha, they gotta know that im the king of the hill now its the two-k-four and everyone huffs and puffs think they walkin tough and livin' in the rough truth of the matter is that most of em don't and its a big game of pretend, but I'm for real so I won't you know the music is goin down the drain when mainstream negativity has control of a person's brain but nah-ahhhh cuz that aint me but yo im for real, the rapper that aint heel everytime I grab a mic I like to flow kick it nice and smooth like Kurtis Blow all the time my rhymes are so unique living proof that you know its a hundred percent technique its my time to shine so dont trip miss ima just sit back and ima rip this Chorus: last and final verse I just gotta tell ya I'm far from the worse I'm ahead in the game, tossin 'round my name rhymes aint the same, just climbin the ladder to fame I rap for the fun of it but I when I spit, I keep it full of wit when I freestyled for fun, no one took me serious but then I started writing songs they became delirious i dont write simple dr. seuss rhymes rap has turned into a game to get the dimes and somehow you can do that by commiting crimes just needs fast talking by city slimes a rat tat tat tat tat I guess thats the way it is rappers come hit it big then they fizz need some new blood so its me the up and comer vocals comin' left and right and hit ya hard like a hummer i can do it all in the fall, spring, winter and summer so come one, come all and get a grip this is how I do it, this is how I rip this Chorus(x2) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 No lie. That was str8 up dope. I thought the audio was already up tho. I had a few beatz goin in my head. Not sure what they were, but u could use almost anything. Cuz I know u can make a smart choice. I love this. Every bit of it. YA 1st song. ha. u know the structure. Hey, why quote a line? When the whole song had a dope rhyme - FuQ said it 1st. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted August 9, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 nice! i feel you on being surrounded by punk..when i grew up it was all alternative music :bang: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 Nice job Jim... Impressive considering it's your first rhyme. My first ever rhyme was called "Life Game"... I kinda still like parts of it though. I might re-write it sometime. We'd better try and up the standard a bit everyone, we got competition! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 Great job Jim, I wouldn't think that it was your 1st song you wrote if you didn't mention that! It's off the hook to see another cat represent for 'Jersey here, you're doing your thing! :thumb: :rock: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WildWildWillennium Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 I love it man, can't wait 2 hear it on audio if u put it up. :rock: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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