Loco Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 Its just one verse that i wrote, after i read a post of one of y'All! Back in da days, hip hop was a thing of love and ****, Only hip-hoppers were lovin it, but that fact changed, it’s not like this no more, today you hearing hip hop in every disco yo, it goes commercial, and dat fact destroys the game, you here ‘em rap on the radio cos’ they love fame, themselves and the money they make, but they don’t care about hip hop just ‘bout how many honeys the take. Back in da days It was about who can rock a party right, About the beats and who’s the best on the mic, Now days it’s like my chain’s 2 million dollars worth, And about that fact who got the biggest house on earth, I don’t know if everything’s still so aight, I suppose it ain’t, so maybe I am aight, I ain’t understand that but maybe i am wrong, Maybe it’s aight and I get dissed for that song. (it's lyricly not on top but i felt like "write it down and show 'em") One Luv Fo' HipHop peace Loco Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 Hey you made some good points in that verse, it could have been lyrically better but it was still a solid verse! :thumb: P.S.-Check out the verse that I posted a lil' while ago here on the board about the state of hip-hop, I'm gonna bring it back to the top so y'all newer members could read it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 9, 2004 Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 loco, dat was gd i liked it, bigteds right could of improved on the lyrics like rhymin aight and aight, that for me was the only down fall, but good lyrics in there and points Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted August 9, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2004 Like i said it's lyricly not on top, but it flows good and when u rap it the aight and aight sound, cool! One Luv Loco Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 12, 2004 Report Share Posted August 12, 2004 (edited) Yeah, reading it through one more time could have smoothed it out a bit (for instance don't use swear words to rhyme with), but you've got some good arguments in there. I think you would get more replies if you let other people know how their verses are too. Remember that not everyone will be massively persuaded to rate your lyrics if you don't rate theirs. Peace Edited August 12, 2004 by Prince Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 15, 2004 Report Share Posted August 15, 2004 Agree wit em. Solid verse. Rhymes don't always gotta be complex tho. Or simple. just a feeling. All true points, but I don't feel it. It was a good verse tho. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Daedalus Mortality Posted August 15, 2004 Members Report Share Posted August 15, 2004 Good flow :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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