bigted Posted December 3, 2006 Report Share Posted December 3, 2006 What Does Peace Really Mean? Poem Written On Sept. 30, 2006 You say you want to give another chance I don't know if this feeling's right I really would like to get off the foolish stance Do you want me to join another fight? Sometimes it don't add up to the right command What does peace really mean? You can't just ask for forgiveness from me and ask me to rip off their heads Time and time and time again I don't know where this is going I really hope that time comes to mend Trying to do all I can to keep the ball rolling Don't try to go around acting opposite Of the feelings that were known to represent You just don't know what I want Trying to bring meaning to peace within I watch you and your fronts Peace could come from various sources Anger can't outweigh it I really'd like to be patient and wait for more Rather than just be paperchasing You could have all the hype in the world But not really be on top If you gotta constantly hurt others To run onto that spot You don't know the meaning of peace When you're not really at ease We all could say things that lead us feeling confused One statement brings interpretations So what we must do To gain something out of that situation Is to put more thoughts into next moves Or else that explanation will have a limitation If you really want peace you must live true There's really claims to an expiration Of a soul that comes unglued Raising the bar over the expectation Could bring a negative attitude The ego must be pushed for a bit Or else you really won't go further if you refuse To meet halfway at least to come to persue confrontations with a proclamation Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted December 4, 2006 Report Share Posted December 4, 2006 That first verse made me think about the war and stuff. "Don't try to go around acting opposite Of the feelings that were known to represent" - Now that's what's up. I really liked these lines. "You could have all the hype in the world But not really be on top If you gotta constantly hurt others To run onto that spot You don't know the meaning of peace When you're not really at ease" - Abuse of the power and unawareness of the responsibility. "To gain something out of that situation Is to put more thoughts into next moves Or else that explanation will have a limitation" - Truth spoken. Makes ya think. That was a nice overall write. Some lines really grabbed me. What got you to writting this? I can see a couple pop of instances, but I'm wonderin' from you personally. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted December 4, 2006 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2006 (edited) I think it really is motivated from the general thought of how somebody could squash beef with another person but it's in the purpose of starting beef with someone else? You could see it in life in general and that's messed up for real, how could you shake hands and squash beef but then start another with another person at basically the same time? How's that having a peaceful attitude? That's what pissed me off to write this, just wanted to bring that real talk Edited December 4, 2006 by bigted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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